The idea for
this story came from an email I received from a friend in the US, with a photo
of a bear, taken in his garden. I wondered how to respond—“wow”, garnished with
a few exclamation marks, seemed inadequate. Should I send him a shot of one of
the animals in the neighbourhood? A close-up of a Jersey bullock, say, with my
dog?
Or one of a ewe?
A herd of Highland cattle?
Wildlife would be more appropriate, but the foxes, hares, deer,
badgers and marten I run into off and on are camera-shy. “Don’t shoot me,” they
plead and go into hiding. I decided that a fictional response would be a lot
easier. In time, as with most of my writing, a scene came to mind, which
developed into a 300-word story. And that was it, until I saw the instructions,
months later, from Bridge House, for the type of material they were looking for,
and put the central character on a bus to see what would happen after the, now
introductory, dialogue. I enjoyed the ride. I hope you will,
too.
Like many of my
stories—of which a dozen or so have appeared in anthologies—“No Bear” is in the
seriocomic vein.
And yes, of
course I know the exact number, but after “a handful”, “a dozen” and “a baker’s
dozen”, there is no casual notch that is serviceable until one arrives at “a
score”. And I’m not there yet. I write slowly. I take long walks. I talk to the
animals I meet. “This is a dog,” I tell them. “What he is doing is a sort of
tackle, inviting you to play. Don’t be afraid; he won’t bite. Now, say cheese,
please. Please?”
Did I hear the
word quirky? Well, if I were, I’d hardly be aware of it, now, would I?
Extract from Day 15: The Bear by L. F. Roth
Lynn shakes her head. “Not that I envy him.”
“Your father?”
“Well, him neither. But it was my brother I was talking
about. Hugh.”
“So you were.”
“Things have always fallen into his lap.”
“I know what you mean.”
Both raise their glasses, regarding the half-empty room – Mondays
are quiet in this part of town. Colleagues rather than friends, they have
reached the stage where they begin to exchange confidences.
“I hadn’t heard from him for ages. Then he sent me this
photo.”
“Of himself?”
“That would have made more sense. No. His son had given him
some sort of fancy camera.”
“His son? You didn’t tell me he had a son. How old is he?”
“What difference does it make? Anyway, the camera had an
infrared sensor, to take pictures in the dark. He fixed it up outside his
weekend place in North Carolina.”
A gesture from Sue indicates that this is going too fast.
“Your brother has a house in the States?”
“Two. He moved there… oh, years ago. Best place to get
ahead, he claimed. A whole other thing than here.”
“What does he do?”
“Something related to finance. He never said. I never asked.
I bet you can’t guess what the picture showed.”
“Was this by a lake?”
“No. Why?”
“I just wondered.”
“The cabin’s on a mountainside. He goes there to relax.”
There is a long pause. The people at the table next to
theirs get up to leave. Chairs scrape against the floor. They both watch them.
“Indians?” Sue suggests
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